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A ten to you, I say. A ten. I hope you have more tens.

First?!

If this is the first time, then consider me a noob!

NO YOU DIDNT!

Oh alright! You got me. I love it! Keep it coming.

Wonderful!

My man, you've captured much emotion in this piece. It reminds me of my childhood... In a good way. Like the movie Willie Wonka (the original) 5/5, 10/10

Wow!

You said you use reason, correct? Is that lead a custom creation, or a preset? I love it so much. If it's a preset, I have NO IDEA how I haven't found it yet. I can think of at least 2 bands I love that use a similar sound (thrice and doves). Let me know!

Regards,
merlin

RedWingX responds:

the lead is a preset. i used vintage dance lead in the thor synthesizer if you have reason 4. thanks for the comment. and this may come as a bit of a suprise, but your song land locked was the inspiration for this song. in the beginning it sounded a bit like it. but as it progressed it moved away into something completely different. so thank you for the inspiration.
-RedWing

To the guy below me

I'm only reviewing this for the guy below me: You need to learn more about music, first off, every song has a time signature, and a tempo. If the time signature is 4/4, or 4/anything for that matter, then you'd have 4 noted on the offbeat for a techno bass. If the song, however, is a 3/4, like this one is, then you'll have 3 beats. And telling anyone that they did ANYTHING wrong with music just makes you sound retarded.

Wowzers!

Thanks so much for making such a kick ass song for the massacre. It was an honor to follow after you!

Regards,
merlin

Hey you!

I told you I would check out at least one of your songs. So I did your first submission, and your newest submission. It's great to see your progress. This one's definitely better than your other work. I like that it's expansive, and transitions in and out of itself. You sort of lost me at the end, at 1:20. Speaking of 120... I can tell that's the bpm of this song. 120 tends to subconsciously come across as boring, and too rhythmic.

I liked the song, though, and I can't wait to hear you master this program you've got. I've never heard of ableton. Most everyone here uses Frooty Loops, however I'm a sort of sore thumb myself, cause I use Propellerhead's Reason, and have never touched FL.

Regards,
merlin

kingbotina responds:

Thank you!
You really help me!
Yes you are right the music is kinda boring in the end...

Maybe some day... I will "master this program" XD someday let's pray...

King Botina

Pretty darn good

I love your piano composures. I liked the melody of this one, and how it's constantly changing, and it even loops nicely. It'd be amazing to hear it a bit longer, and with the poem spoken, or sang if that was the intention. I felt like the song should have gone on, though. Longer, and have a part with chords. There's a lot of 8th notes in there, maybe switch to some cool bassy chords on the rhythm hand with half notes, then two quarter notes? I'm a sucker for awesome chords, and I know you have the talent to find the right ones.

Regards,
merlin

Rwinius responds:

that really is a great idea! its a bit of an old poem, but i found it to fit the atmosphere of the score, but to accually use it in the song, i hadnt even thought of that! thanks a lot! i

ll probably exend it too, im gonna find a nice soothing female voice to read the poem :) ill defenitly let you know when/ if its done :D

wow

This is a VERY well made song. It flows amazingly, and it doesn't feel empty at any point. Best song of the week, hands down for me. 5/5 10/10

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Haha thank you!

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